I wrote a list of what I would take to my picnic and I made a sandwich with cheese, pepperoni, and mayonnaise. My sister is doing persuasive writing for her learning so I wrote my ideas about the question "should I tidy up every day?".
Hi Pippa. Great persuasive writing. Wow- you are practising for next year when you are in Kereru! Keep an eye on those naughty 'f's! My favourite sandwich is a BLT. I want to know if you do tidy up everyday.I like the way you are sounding out words when you are writing. Keep up all the great writing tasks.
Kia ora Pippa. I liked the part where you said it keeps the room tidy and stylish. You have some great reasons in there. Your list for the picnic and guests look great fun, I am sure they will all be excited to be invited. What would be your favourite thing to eat on the list?
That lunch looks great! I like to have an apple everyday for my lunch or morning tea. I wonder what's in your sandwiches. It looks like you have some yummy food on your list too! Keep up the great work Pippa.
Hi Pippa. Great persuasive writing. Wow- you are practising for next year when you are in Kereru! Keep an eye on those naughty 'f's! My favourite sandwich is a BLT. I want to know if you do tidy up everyday.I like the way you are sounding out words when you are writing.
ReplyDeleteKeep up all the great writing tasks.
Kia ora Pippa. I liked the part where you said it keeps the room tidy and stylish. You have some great reasons in there. Your list for the picnic and guests look great fun, I am sure they will all be excited to be invited. What would be your favourite thing to eat on the list?
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ReplyDeleteThat lunch looks great! I like to have an apple everyday for my lunch or morning tea. I wonder what's in your sandwiches. It looks like you have some yummy food on your list too!
Keep up the great work Pippa.